Very good syntax analysis, but how do the prep phrases used as modifiers describe her struggle? I think it would be a little more effective if you were to explain why this style was used. Just a suggestion! Great job!
I believe that her heart is into her children and mothering, she just isn't a natural mothering type.
Really, really good drawing!And I really liked the reference to Jesus and John the baptist, it cleared things up a lot.
I love how organized all the work is. The symbolism in the art work was phinominal. At first when I was looking at the presentations, the first two diction and syntax, they seemed really wordy. It overwelled me all the words that were there on the screen, but it all came together in a great way. I woud have tried to add somemore color, actions, or sound to the first two so that the reader really gets into it and will not feel bored or overloaded. The christian references really helped me think more in depth about the reading.
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