Sunday, October 11, 2009

Sentence 8

His sentence:
It was a long ride in the cold, sullen, slippery rain.
from Death Be Not Proud by John Gunther

Even though this sentence is very simple, it is very descriptive and somewhat deep in its listing of what the rain was like. It sets the mood.

My sentence:
It was a scary thought in a dark, cold, eerie room.

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